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martes, 25 de noviembre de 2014

The creation of the stars

The Creation of the Stars

There was a very far a way town in the out of Paris, France, there lived a lot of people but they were very preocupated because in any part of the town it wasn't any light, but this was a beautiful town, there were a lot of threes and parks but it was a little bit small. There were living a lot of persons in a very small town, but this person are very good people. They were very preocupated with the problem of the light, so they pray all the time so the god of the light come and resolve or help them with the town problem, so all the very good people that live there could be a better town.

They called the goddess  of the light thought a ritual. The people of this little town had to make a fire with al the torches that they have. In a night the goddess appeared she ask them what they wanted. An old man told the goddess the problems that they have in the night and he ask her to give them light without working. The goddess tell the old man that she would help them if they called the god of the night to help her to do her work. The goddess disappeared and the town didn't know what to do. They looked for all the forms to call the god but it never work. But one afternoon a little girl tell the old man to go to the enormous volcano. First the people were afraid but then the man tell them that it was the only way to get light.


 The people of that little town were scared of thinking that they have to jump into a volcano to have the help of the god. The most older in that town tell the youngest that they had to scarified themselves to save the others, first they refuse but when all the old people said that it was a good idea the younger people accept.
They prepare all the things that they needed for the journey, they started their way to the death in the morning when the sun was down. It was very difficult to look for a volcano in that place, all that they could see was trees, lakes and grass. in the night when they were very exhausted they repose next to a river, to drink water, and a boy listened a loud sound, so he look where the sound came from and he saw a big volcano. The group run to that direction and when they were around it they jumped and die.


 Finally, the two goddesses, the goddess of the light and the god of the night, gave to the people that where in that city the beautiful starts that appear in the big sky. The people were so glad because they finally have some light in the sky apart from the sun, but that was only in the day, the night have lots of shining starts. The goddesses finally say good bye to them, and went to there home. All the people enjoyed the shining lights that were in the sky, and they loved them very much

miércoles, 17 de septiembre de 2014

Fable

Once upon a time in a big and green Savanna there was a brave but arrogant lion called Samuel. This lion was the King of the Savanna  and all the subjects were afraid of him. Samuel never said please or thank you, and he did not have friends. Nobody dared to challenge him because if they lose they would  be banished. But one day, when Samuel was resting, a misterious snake challenged him. If the lion won he would be banished but if the snake won, he would be the king. The lion acepted carefreely and he continued resting.

The arrogant lion, Samuel, was standing behind a tree. He was thinking the way he could make front and fight with the snake without causing him a suffering death. He knew that he will win the bet but he didn’t want his Kingdom furious and embrassed of their magnificous king, himself. From the other side, the Kingdom will like to know that they had a strong and powerful King who would protect them from all kinds of danger. During his reflection, he did not even see that an owl  was near him and was watching him with caution. When Samuel realiced it, seriously, the owl Albus, warned the king:
-My Majesty, beware of the snake´s cunning. He knows exactly your arrogant thoughts, and he will take advantage of it. Use your wisdom, knowledge and power correctly. Take advantage about your power of lion and king of this wild kingdom. I send you my luck, majesty.   

The fight day arrived, they started to fight, first, the snake hit the lion's feet and the lion hit the floor.Then, he roar and the snake flew for some seconds, when the lion touched the snake for first time, he paralized for an hour and the snake celebrated,  he thought it was done. But when the lion woke up he said that he only wanted to be his friend. Although, when the snake was going to give him a hug he fall again because his skin was poisonous.  The king  did not accept his lost feud and battle, but, unfortunately for him, a bet was a bet, and he had given the snake his promise.

When the lion loses he became the snake's clown in his kingdom to make them laugh. They were always fighting, until the snake got really angry . She put a sword in the lion's neck and told him that if he stills bodering her, she will insert the sword in his heart. The lion accepted and  went to his room, where he hit a photo of the snake with a stick. Then, the snake came and told him that he was sorry about what have happened and that he was going to be promoted. The lion was very happy but they still hate each other.

Some hours after, the lion cried a lot because he didn't win to a small animal like the snake and now he was his personal clown. He told everyone that the snake cheated but anyone believed him. He was very disappointed of losing but furious with the snake, so he looked for it and when he found it. He shouted him:
-¡That was unfair! You are poisonous and you didn't tell it to me, you must give me back my throne.
- I will not give you back your place, because I told it to you, but you didn't listen me
- That's a lie, you didn't advice me, you don't  disserved to be the king. You are very small and innocent.

- I make remember to you that with only a touch of you, you will paralyze of my poison I may be small but I am very clever and strong 
After telling this, the lion ran away and nobody knew were he went. Days passed and all the Savanna rest in peace.
Moral: do not judge people before knowing them well.

martes, 15 de julio de 2014

Formal letter

Dear Mr. Pratt,
I am writing this letter to you because you behaved very badly in my house. I thought that you were a gentleman, until I listened the prize of the winner. We knew since a long time, and we were friends, but when I heard to you and my father about the bet, I thought that only we have to be friends.
So then, while you were winning the game I did something that I knew that you heated, to smoke. You told me last summer that you couldn't smoke because a problem of your health, I am sorry of that, but I didn't had another thing to stop the bet.
When I saw my nanny telling us that you were cheating I get very sad and upset. So I told you to go out of my house and never talk to me.
Well, I think that with this letter  you will never bother me. So I will say good bye for last time.
yours sincerely,

 Louise Brown


martes, 13 de mayo de 2014

Informal letter

Dear Jhon (Smith),


Hello, how are you? I write this because I had taken money from the bankbook, to buy that beautiful house in Hudson that I talked about months.

I wanted that house, but you didn't let me take money of the bankbook, so when you were outside with Braling  I took ten  thousand dollars.

I know that it's a lot and you are angry for that. I'm so sorry of that but I wanted to take dollars to buy a marionette like myself, and put it in the bed to see if you can discover the true.

If you are not angry I'm waiting here with a smile in my face.

I have to stop writing because I think that It'll be longer that I exepted


 See you sonn!

Nettie