miércoles, 25 de mayo de 2016

Writing poetry

In class we read a poem called 'She was a Phantom of delight' that talked about the feelings of a man to a woman. So then we had to write our own poem.

Fearless love

Eyes as blue as an ocean
full of dreams and emotions
Brown and soft hair
wild by the wind but you didn't care.

The whispers around us would never stop
but both of us could make them go
Smiling was our only defense
because anything around us could make sense.

The feelings hided deep in some place
crying for someones help
Fighting the darkness storm
bleeding the words of love.






1 comentario:

  1. Amazing work Dolores!
    You´ve made great use of language and vocabulary. Your poem is very sweet, visual and expressive. The rhyme also adds so much beauty to your work...
    Congratulations!!

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